Any Suggestions for a name for this?

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Trem
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Any Suggestions for a name for this?

Post#1 » Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:06 am

Someday I find the truth

The answers to all of these

As I walk out alone, with no one by my side

I'm the only one around for miles, this time

This is the reason that I've started

To make amends with you

And I know, that we can get things right

Let's not get this started

Maybe I'm falling for you

Like it's a bad thing

I'm breaking all the ties

The memories are now shattered

Into pieces, scattered around

You're the voice I once heard

The person in my dreams

That I failed to search for, to find

Let's not get this started

Maybe I'm falling for you

Like it's a bad thing

I see your name outlined into objects

Places that I've never been to see

And all this rain is rushing down, flooding me

But not rushing me away

I found the beauty of you taking me and pushing me back

Leaving me almost for dead

Turning around to leave me alone

You'll never see me again

The sun never rises on our end

We must live our lives in darkness

Never seeing the light of day

Your dreams had gone to the past

It's never the time to turn back

We must go on

And leave all our worries behind

And we all hold on to them

(I'm so cold I'm burning inside)

Don't forget what the past holds

(I feel so dead when I'm alive)



It is a song, I just cannot think of a name for the life of me. lol </div>




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Any Suggestions for a name for this?

Post#2 » Wed Mar 30, 2011 7:48 am

what about



"Falling for you?" </div>




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Any Suggestions for a name for this?

Post#3 » Wed Mar 30, 2011 8:04 am

hmm... I like it.



Thanks Wolf, it will be put into Consideration. and when I publish it to my Allpoetry page I will be sure to put credit to you for the name if it is used :) </div>




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Any Suggestions for a name for this?

Post#4 » Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:07 am

Heh, don't worry about credit, it came right from the song. I always like song names that derive from a subtle line said in the song that you don't always notice, but gives understanding to the work its self. </div>




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