Over the course of the last few weeks, whilst making an RP site with Aea, I have set about writing a story of sorts. The genre is Warhammer 40,000, which I know won't interest many of you out there. But for those it does I have loaded the beginning of the story onto FanFiction.net, and it will remain there as I continue to update it. I shall link you to the story now, and add a reply to this topic whenever a new section is added. I hope that any of you already on FF will review the story and that any of you, even those just viewing it as guests, will reply (to this topic, if needbe) and give me advice or criticisms.
The Story: The Annuals of Inquisitor Toth </div>
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